Newbie inviting critiques
I have started oil on canvas painting and this is my first attempt. Would like to hear what you think about1. Brushwork2. Color choices3. Wet on Wet areasand generally anything that you think....IMAG0049 Copy.png
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guys please go through my sketches in my profile and please give some improvement suggestion and ways to achieve perfection............
hello everyone!!
posting an artwork.. please comment for flaws and improvements!!
Hi, I am self taught artist - have just joined this group. I have uploadd few of my works - would appreciate honest opnion.
Thanks
Hi George... I tried once again(without tracing). Found difficult in making the frame of the light darker. So over painted some places. Pls comment on it.
A photograph likes this with no detail depends entirely on the silhouette for it to make sense. The edges have to be crisp, straight and should look machined. Not organic.
If you would like to do this again, I recomend that you print it out, trace the outline, and fill in the dark just like the first time, but this time with clean straight edges. Also the thin lines such as the wire handle etc. Draw it clearly and crisply. I think it will make a huge difference.
Hi George... This is the Original photograph taken from Net